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| Ben03 |
Free Motion cover & artwork
Free Motion wallpaper: http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t129/norco66/3background.jpg |
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| JAW |
Has no one got anything to say about such exuberant artwork?? | ||
| jake-snake |
very pro
10 out of 10 |
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| phils010 |
the front looks gd, i like it
not to shore about the back tho :S |
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| Ben03 |
Would you put that down to the overlapping pics with the backgound or the invert pic? (Does look quite blue here) Have already printed the covers but appreciate any other thoughts/critique! Forgot to mention more details here: http://www.jab-ride.co.uk/freemotion.htm |
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| Heffers |
I like.
the back does look rather blue on my moniter. |
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| robbo |
I'd seperate the smaller pics rather than overlap them.
Is there a typo on the text - it says something about following in true progression - does that make sense? I can't see it now, as I'm typing this post 
Can I see this epic blockbuster without parting with money? Are you having a premier for 'stoked' local riders or something? Ha ha, only pulling your leg Ben 
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| phils010 |
the blurry mountains on the back just doesnt do it for me,
sorry to be negative 
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| Ben03 |
That's no typo! Yep its at Leicester Sq (champagne included  )
Can understand if you're scared to part with money being a homegrown thing but feedback has been all good so far. |
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| JAW |
'True Progression' makes perfect sense robbo!
Erm.... they're not blurry.... |
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| robbo |
"Free Motion follows in true progression of the New Motion Series"
What I meant was should the 'in' be a 'the' so it would read "Free Motion follows the true progression of the New Motion Series" Possessive - non? |
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| Ben03 |
A difficult one robbo!
Suppose 'the' would refer more to just the riding but 'in' is more about the whole thing; filmimg, editing and riding. Argh have confused myself now
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| robbo |
Let me un-confuse you - I'm right 
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| JAW |
I still think it makes sense!
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| Pires |
I'm with Rob!
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| JAW |
I'm with me! 
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